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Wednesday 28 August 2013

Pate/Descriptive Writing Practice


Its a dark Freaky nite There was a show down at elm street performers entertaining the crowd goes wild cheering and screaming as the performers take a glimpse of glory it was Tim’s turn up the stage.Standing by him is a assistant standing beside Tim she walks over to a wooden wall and faces Tim and makes a pose tim can taste his own saliva well a drop of sweat runs down his nose.He has knifes in his hand HE’S STARTS the crowds stand their throwing knifes missing her well the knife are speed like ninja stars he managed to miss her with every single shot some people from the crowd opened their eye they start to clap and cheer and saying “hooray!!!”it down to the last performers to end of the crowd walking home with a bang three giant balls are placed where the middle of the stage three of the performers swallows hoping he won't muck up the act.All three of them walk up onto the stage with bowling pins they hop on to the balls and start juggling the pins.

This is my writing Practice that we did to get prepared for our test hope you enjoy please leave a comment thank you

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