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Monday 16 December 2013

My Netbook Reflection 2013


This is My Netbook Reflection 2013 It telling me questions how i learn at school

Thursday 12 December 2013

HomoPhone


This is our homophones that i did with my friend kamaka

Wednesday 4 December 2013

Lean On Me WALT use our analysing skills.

Lean On Me
WALT use our analysing skills.
Success Criteria:
I can...
Part of the song
What is the main idea(s) in this part of the song?
Give an example from the text that supports this idea.
Give another example from the text that supports this idea.
Express your viewpoint by synthesising what you have analysed.
-Do you agree with this part of the song? Why/why not?
Verse 1
The main idea in verse 1 is our lives and to be wise.
Sometimes in our lives”

“But if we are wise
We know that there's always tomorrow”
I agree because what I think of this verse is that in our lives we struggle and go through hard and tough times but if we think positively we will know that we have tomorrow to look forward to.

We may not have everything we want, but we have what we need.
Chorus
The main idea in the chorus is that it’s ok to ask for help.
“You just call on me brother, when you need a helpin hand”
“We all need somebody to lean on
I just might have a problem that you'd understand
We all need somebody to lean on”
I agree with the lyrics of the song because it should be ok to ask for help, or help those in need.
Verse 2
The main idea in verse 2 is Share.
“Swallow your pride If I have things
You need to borrow”.
For no one can fill those of your need
That you won’t let show
I agree because I think it is about your pride and for people who are in needs.
Verse 3
The main idea in verse 3 is Caring.
“Call me (when you need a friend)”
“We all need somebody to lean on
I just might have a problem that you'd understand
We all need somebody to lean on”
I agree because I think this is about friendship like when we need somebody and to understand if they have problems.
This is my task about lean on me the song i did with kamaka 

Piano VERSION OF Lean on me by Glee

Lean on me by Glee

C FIRST INVERSION

DM FIRST INVERSION

EM FIRST INVERSION


F FIRST INVERSION


G7TH CHORD

This Is the chords for lean in me by Glee My Kamaka Learnt For our School Production

Tuesday 3 December 2013

My Poem About My Goal

Achieving my goals is one of my roles
seeking to accomplish is my wish
using my ideas tells that I could care.

My goals for this term is being a good boy
I would not apply of playing with a toy and
I am achieving my aspiration
with my inspiration.

My goal is the key
to everything even for me
and My goal is to act like a year 8
before your opportunity is gonna be late.

What is the meaning to my poem?
This is about achieving my goals and to act like you can achieve my goals.This can help me be more self reliant and to not apply being a silly boy.

What I think of the poem is to achieve my goals,acting like a grown up and to make a change.


This my poem about achieving my goals

Twista ft Faith Evans


this is my presentation about Twista ft Faith Evans

The Clouds

      The Clouds
                            
Rhythm: Pate Pua and Simon Tanoai
Beat Box: Kamaka Tarawa II and Sau Tafea
Singing: Simon Tanoai & Lua Hafoka

I look and feel the sky
and I wish I could fly

I see the clouds passing by and I see a clouds looking like a blueberry pie

I see black clouds moving past me
then the white clouds came unto thee

I wish I had a money tree
and it’s was for only me,Kmax,Pats and the other three

I want to be a billionaire so freakin bad
smiling next to miss aireen and her famz

           I believe in Miss Aireen
is her favourite colour green
or is it blinged

THANK YOU FOR YOUR TIME
PLEASE DON’T MIME
FROM THIS COOL RHYME

                                  

Narrative Term 4 2013

THE BUSH


It was a peculiar night their lived four men who loved to go camping their names were Jake,Simon,Peter,Sam.One day Jake drove Simon and the Boys deep into the forest in Piha on their way they sang songs and Jake said “Hey Sam where should our campout be?” Sam replied “How about near those bushes” The boys agreed so went off deep into the sour forest of Piha.


As they were setting up their tents could  Hear a strange peculiar noise coming from the bush the boys campout as they approached closer and closer they could hear like it a hiss of a Rattle snake about to strike in a hundred miles per hour trying inject venom Peter the boys ran back to their tents but luckily Peter was Professional his catching rattle snake for over an year Peter tilted head to the side and reached into his pocket took out some carcass with fresh blood chuck it far away snake chased it.


In the night lit up bonfire then had some marshmallows the tents and drifted of to sleep as they could the bush making noises and noise that was problem because the boys kept waking up this it actually a snake  they couldn’t even see anything all they could is blackness Sam said with a tired voice “Hey Peter what time is it?” ‘Its 3.30 in the morning  replied Peter “Man! what are do now” said Jake “Were just sleep on it and will hopefully will deal with it tomorrow” said Simon.

So the boys slept on it and early in the morning hear it again So they went for a jog and they sprinted as fast as they go as and when they got back the food scrap everywhere they was still shaking then suddenly out came grizzly bear they sprinter to their tents pack their bag and ran Peter Said where’s the van Jake!!!! “Over their"

this was my Narrative Term 4 2013 About the bush

Monday 2 December 2013

Tuesday 26 November 2013

PMKS The World's Greatest by R.Kelly

The World’s Greatest by R.Kelly

WALT use our analysing skills.

Success Criteria:
I can...



Part of the song
What is the main idea(s) in this part of the song?
Give an example from the text that supports this idea.
Give another example from the text that supports this idea.
Express your viewpoint by synthesising what you have analysed.
-Do you agree with this part of the song? Why/why not?
Verse 1
The main idea in this verse is inspiration...
“I am a mountain, I am a tall tree.”
“I am a swift wind sweepin in the country.”
Yes I agree with this part of the song because everyone has a inspiration of who they look up to and want to become in the future.
Chorus
The main idea in this chorus is how people can achieve their aspiration
“Im that Star up in the im that sky hey,i made it emmmm
“I'm that mountain peak up high Hey i made it
Yes i agree because artist wanted to lead people their and also to achieve their own aspiration.
Verse 2
I think that this verse is about being fearless.
“I am a lion down in the jungle”
“I am a giant I am a eagle”
“Yes I agree because I think that you have to stand up for yourself”
Verse 3
What I think about the third verse is about caring,love and the world...
“In the ring of life”
“I’m the worlds greatest”
“I’ll reign love”
“When all is darkest,I’ll shine a light”
“Yes I agree because I think that no matter what he is he cares about the earth because he shows that he think the greatest world is earth”
Verse 4


The main idea is to follow dreams...
“In the end of tunnel there is a pot of gold.”
“And faith was right there to pull me through, yeah now I can just walk through.”
Yes I agree with this because faith can help you follow your dreams and pull you to a great future.
This is Our group work we did we were analysing they main idea and key message in the song

Thursday 21 November 2013

6 hat current events


Me and Kamaka did 6 hat current events for the amazing fight for David Tua Vs Alexander Goliath Ustinov

Wednesday 20 November 2013

My blog commenting


This is My blog commenting that i did with Kamaka

Main Idea Summary Frame


This is my Main Idea Summary Frame that I did with Kamaka

Monday 18 November 2013

Wednesday 13 November 2013

Finders keepers

Sometimes you lose stuff and gain stuff but at the end of the day its is important to take care of your belongings or else it will be the finders keepers game.

 

The Manaiakalani Film Festival this year.

Click play to view the trailer of the movies our school have made for the Manaiakalani Film Festival this year. 


 
Manaiakalani Film Festival Trailer - Tamaki Primary School Movies from Tamaki Primary on Vimeo.

Thursday 24 October 2013

The Best Tropical Beach Resort

Answer the following the questions below;

From the title of the story what do we think the story is about?The best tropical beach resort that Andy made

From looking at the image of the first page, how does the picture support the title?Because its a tropical resort and the title is spelled with the best tropical beach resort.

What had Andy arranged?Their parents living room and their own bedrooms as well the whole house.

Why did the sand guy say “we don’t usually dump sand in lounges”?Because in real life people don’t usually dump sand in their house because it messy.

Where was Andy planning on putting the pool?He planned to put the pool his own bedroom.

What did Andy want the area to be - use a quote from the story?Let build the tropical beach resort in hamilton!

Why didn’t the two men do dancers and mosquitoes?Because they couldn’t find hula dancers and mosquitoes in winter.

What happened when Andy’s parents got home?They were shock because Andy hula dancers in dads bedroom and put a pool were mum’s bedroom was.

Andy’s mum gulped her glass of water as she was asking questions - was that a good or bad thing, why?because she wanted to know why Andy build a tropical resort in the house.

How do you think Andy’s parents felt as he just left for Hawaii after he had turned their lounge into a beach resort?Probably sad cause it takes hours and hours take sand out of the carpets and suck out water from the pool.

Was it a good idea that Andy turned their lounge into a resort?No Explain why?because it would have been better just to move Hawaii then building all those things.

If you could turn your lounge into anything, what would it be and why?It would have to a restaurant.

This is my questions that i answered for The Best Tropical Beach Resort by Christine Larsen.
 






Wednesday 23 October 2013

Drift by Denis Glover -

Drift by Denis Glover -

What are some features we can see in the poem? Use words and quotes from the poem to support your answer...Because the poem is about driftwood floating threw the water from the form from aa to bb.

What is the author’s purpose of the poem?The purpose of the poem is all about driftwood and also to show kids to follow your dreams no matter what happens in life.



What are the key ideas in the poem?The kind of like word for example
sullen,castaways,storm,tangled,sodden,driftwood,deadmans bay,Deadman's reach,wind,weather,drifting,ocean sifting.



Why do you think these are the key ideas?Because of the language and the main idea of text kind of hooks in the reader.



How does the poem make you feel?It make me feel great because it interesting to read.



Why does it make you feel this way?because it hooks in the reader in many ways.



How does the image in the poem support the way the poem makes your feel?It supports the main ideas with and word that hooks people and the audience.

This is my questions about denis clover

Tuesday 22 October 2013

Integrity


This is my brain storm about integrity

My Author study,


This is my author study about the hunger games trilogy hope you like it

Monday 21 October 2013

Drumming performance


This is my presentation of the drumming performance we had on thursday

Tuesday 15 October 2013

My holiday experience

As i got out of the car my heart feel overloaded As i enter the room all i could feel is a bright soft breeze that has captured my face all you could see is people line up ready to go to the cash register all you could hear is “chick ching” wallets flying coins rolling cash gliding and also people bulging to buy food! in line so that they could see their movie and have the time of their lives.

As you enter the room all you will see is pitch blackness and little bit of light and also hundreds of people just ready to watch.I tilt my to the side to find a seat i feel what my instincts are telling me it felt like 250 volt were spread around me and a little dazzle with pins and needles i dashed across the room like i was Usain bolt  hoping that it hadn’t been taken .The movie is about to start my heart is pounding my blood vessels like they were vacuums and all you can see a man passing out glasses and when you put it on the graphics pop out i reached out to see if i could touch it.



For the first day of school we made a description of our holiday hope you enjoy!!

Tuesday 24 September 2013

Friday 13 September 2013

Believe poems


I believe in many things
in God and what we are
Looking to the future
awaits a shining star.

Believe in Love
Believe in Faith
Believe in Truth
Believe that no matter what happens, you have the power to prevail.


A different life, back in the day
Before God's sons did go astray
Then, lucifer thought he was great
So he rebelled and sealed his fate.

Friendship poems

Friendship poems

Friendship, not really something you can buy;
But more like something you must earn,
Friendships you buy, tend to not last long,
Unlike friendships you earn, that could last a lifetime.

Friendship is like a bunch of flowers tied together,
Happiness and solitude for some auspicious moments rather.
Friendship bears the sorrows and happiness of two souls,
It also bears misfortunes and disasters in various moulds.

A true friendship is Golden,
It lasts for eternity, not for a fleeting moment,
It endures petty squabbles and unkind words,
it endures because it is Golden.