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The Powerful MOUNTAIN !
ORIENTATION
In the ancient times there lived an young old boy named Jack who was an orphan. He lived with other kids. One day jack came back from a hard day of work and said to his friend Kini ‘’hey hurry and make me some food said jack .Kini replied “why don't you legs work from a busy day “alright i'll go make some when suddenly jack turned on the t.v channel 8 news breaking news there is an volcanic eruption in new Zealand Hamilton so everyone has being warned.My name is Garry wild getting all up in your news.so jack said to his friend Kini “hey Kini why don't go we up the mountain to see if its real” Kini replied with full of anger and clutch his feast and said “NO! “ we can’t go up there we will be dead by now and we we would be turned into stone” “come said jack if it real then we will go back down and rush to airport and fly somewere else then we would fly to Auckland .
PROBLEM
So they move to a place in Auckland right next to Hamilton where there was heaps of volcanoes but jack was lucky because they are all asleep. but one day from that volcano in Hamilton erupted but when that volcano erupted that caused to wake up all the volcanoes in Auckland to wake up then they rushed to Auckland airport the lava was almost about to swapping everything in it path.then suddenly …. Jack had a plan as an imagine light bold pop up on his head.
SOLUTION Then kini was running but he missed the last plane and he died in the age of 15 jack survived but kini past away they had a furunral jack was sad because it was a speical day for him and it was really sad.
ENDING
Jack had learnt not to go up a mountain when its a eruption or tricking other people to die.
