There lived a man named Jack he was a rich man.One day Jack decided to go on holiday on the Titanic ship.On the ship he meet a beautiful girl named Rose they were a couple.
That night something was wrong the ship was sailing toward the iceberg .The ship stopped then it started to lean one way everyone aboard was shocked they didn't expect it to happen then it started to sink Rose and Jack were scared because they didn't want to end their relationship because they just meet they were happy to be together Rose and Jack tried to help People aboard but they couldn't .The boat came to rescue the people but some people die as the water rised.
The water come high and the boat tipped Rose and Jack fell off the ship and everyone else
Solution
The water was freezing cold Jack got a wood and told Rose to hope on it while Jack freeze to death and and the people aboard .The boat came to see if there were any survivors the only survivor was Rose she was saved Jack and the people died and the boat sank to the bottom of the water .
by pate
5 comments:
Hi Pate, Thanks for sharing your writing about the Titanic. You have included lots of key ideas from the story. I remember seeing the movie and enjoyed it too. It was quite scary when the ship sunk though. Have you seen the movie in 3D?
nice one pate very good I very like it.
31/5/12
Hi Pate,nice writing about titanic you have done it was a al some writing.you drove me in to your writing.It was scary when newly all of the people died.have you seen the move.
Malo Lelei Pate I loved your Titanic story it connected with the moive and it gives you a picture in your mind.Your story was touchful sad to read. It was sad when Jack froze in the ocean and Rose was the only survivor in the ocean.Have you watched the Moive yet?
Hi Pate your story was cool and interesting, man i like how rose saved the man and how they meet. Cool! keep it up friend :)
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